Mind
Mind's moments are
Miracle and marvelous .
Motion of mind is
Nor miserable neither mise
Mind itself is mature
With the mutinous ideas
As well as meaningful things...
Mind is most melodious music,
Sometimes it is mild magic.
Most probably mighty thought -
Mind is most great itself..
Millions of minds are
Act like monkeys, yet
Mind is like Marbles.
Mysterious experiences
Stored in meek mind...
Mad, man made thoughts, most memorable
'Me, my, mine, myself, my style'
My mind most refuses such motivations..
Mother nature's mild mind
Most mammals spoil murky mind
Misuse it and make weak and mad mood..
Mind should be meaningful
Memorable, most elegant
Elaborated evolved evoked
To rule and control all...
@Prem @
The poet has attempted to present mind's behavior through the poem. Human mind is fickle. The poet has rightly compared it with marbles. Thoughts which dwells in mind of a human being determines his / her course of life. Virtuous mind leads virtuous life while evil mind produces evil life. Mind of a human reflects his / her internal true personality . Outwardly spoken or written words may be deceiving. In this connection, I remember two beautiful lines of Radha Suchi, an EV member, " When care is Expressed truly, people will get Impressed naturally !! ". It is the mind which produces sensible as well as revolutionary or violent humans. I also remember the oft - qouted line of well known poet, Ravidas, " MAN CHANGA TO KATHOTI ME GANGA ( If your mind is pure, you need not search for Almighty God elsewhere ) . In this poem, the poet has employed a poetic device called ' Alliteration ' extensively. He used words which had begun with letter ' m ' for fifty nine (59) times throughout the poem ! Many readers feel it troublesome, but I have no objection against it. Mind is really miracle and marvoulous. Many psychologist spend their lives while analysing mind's behaviour and many more are still doing their research on it. I like the poet's idea that mysterious experiences are stored in meek minded people. He ended the poem with a suggestion that a human being's mind should be mature enough to live in a peaceful society.
By Datta Nawadkar
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